April 6, 2014
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Celestial Jerusalem
It was a Saturday night
and I had $5 in my pocket.
I took my sweetheart to the dance.
Music had the place on fire.
She took off her top and said
" Let's go for a swim!" So I pushed her in.
That's when the eruptions began.Men in their shaggy tattered shorts
danced all around the rim
while the rivers ran red.
Rising smoke, rising din
swirled around my head.
Then the dragon took its bride,
swallowed my pride
deep inside and smiled.Out of the sky glittering gold
A celestial being shimmering and bold
swooped down,
looked me in the eyes.
She frowned
and seemed quite surprised.
(In a low voice she said)
"Where do you come from?"
"From across the open ocean."Her ancient city
rose up out of the sea
It was looking oh so pretty
with its streets all lined with gold.
Pillars of salt carved into men
captured His story
or so I was told.
And the celestial being turned.
In a softer voice coy and sly,"My friend, come away with me"
as the walls of the city
climbed up into the sky.
"Leave this nitty-gritty place."
I was compelled to comply
so I gestured with a sigh
gave my final goodbye
to the whole human race
as the curtain of brimstone fell.Here on earth
the gods are just men
heroes of turf and celluloid
and how much they spend
worshiped for their arms and teeth
pennies and loafing
those are not my beliefs.So with great relief
I entered into
the allabaster walled city
of the new Jerusalem
up in the sky.
Comments (6)
I did not get the concept of "celestial Jerusalem" until I read your poem.
Thank you.
Wow, that was really creative. You have an amazing mind.
Hope your week goes well,
frank
Beautifully written!
I love how your mind works!
I love your take on the New Jerusalem!
HUGS!!!
The penultimate stanza resonates with me.
The story from a personal point of view - very nice! I'm guessing you were noodling this one out while swinging the axe...
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